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Friday, October 20, 2017

Miss Journee 🌷

WALT: write a qautrain

                                                           Miss Journee  🌷


Oh ravishing Miss Journee 
You remind me of a bouquet!
You smell like a Lilly
Ok that's a bit silly!

Miss  Journee you're ever so sweet
You're like an agglutinated lollipop!
Sometimes you remind me of a parakeet 
You belong in a cake shop!

Oh courteous Miss Journee 
I hope you have had a great day!
You belong on broadway 
You remind me of a ice cream sundae!

Miss Journee you're lovely like a blossom 
You bloom all your effulgent colours!
And I think everyone agrees because 
Miss Journee you're really just awesome!

By Saskia 
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1 comment:

  1. Miss JourneeOctober 28, 2017 at 9:15 PM

    Hi Saskia
    I really enjoyed your poem and learnt a new word - agglutinated! I like how I am being compared to an icecream sundae, a boquet of flowers and that I belong in a cake shop. How did you come up with your ideas? I hope Term 1 has started well for you. Miss Journee :)

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